Mama just got out of the hospital and it has been a very long time since Esperanza has seen her. Esperanza has a lot to tell Mama about what has happened over the last five months. What would you choose to tell Mama about first? Write from the perspective of Esperanza.
If I was Esperanza I would tell Mama about me and Miguel was having a argument and that it was my fault that Miguel was gone and that Isabel was not the Queen of May so that is what I will tell Mama.
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If I was Esparanza and I was talking to mama I would talk about
ReplyDeletethe strikers and Marta. Then I would tell her about Isabel not being Queen of May. Then tell her about Miguel.
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What i will tell Mama first is that Esperanza had to work at the farm or Miguel and had to get money then Miguel went to California and took all of the money for her roadtrip.
ReplyDeleteMomma i'm gonna tell you everything that happen first I was at work and all the workers striked I got home and every one at Miguel's job striked too they all got sent to mexico. me and miguel was talking and I called him a peasant. Isabel didn't queen of may pageant at her school.
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If I was Esperanza and Mama was just getting out of the hospital I would tell her that I have been working in the sheds packing asparagus and sorting out peaches. I would also tell Mama about how I have been getting money orders so I could eventually send enough money to Abuelita so she could come to America and be with us. Another thing I could tell Mama is that the roses are starting to bloom.
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If I was Esperanza because Mama was gone for 5 months I would tell her first that Miguel went gone with your money. Another thing I would tell her is I would ask her how does she feel. My final reason is tell Mma about my doll is dusty it has been sitting under the my bed the whole time.
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ReplyDeleteWhat i would tell mom about first is that it's better that Isble haves the doll, next is about the whole story about why Miguel.
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If I was Esperanza I would tell Mama that Miguel and I were having a argument and that Isabel wasn’t the Queen of May so that is I would tell Mama.
ReplyDeleteI” would tell Mama, after 5 months men came from North Carolina,and they said they will charge less for work then Miguel the job said either dig holes or leave he digged holes and still got paid but not as much”. Esperanza yelled at him because she wanted him to talk to them and see if he could still work for the same amount of money but he said that’s like stricken so she picked an argument and also she didn’t tell Mama, about Isabell, not winning the princess.
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If I was Esperanza and my mama just got back from the hospital the first thing I would tell mama is that me and Miguel were arguing then he left. I would also tell her that I got used to taking care of the babies and I worked in the shed, Isabella didn’t get queen of the May, and I would tell mama about all the money I was saving and Miguel was probably the only one that looks like he took her money because he left to go look for a job at the railroad and her money was all gone.That’s what I would’ve told mama if I was Esperanza.
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If i was Esperanza i will tell her that Isabel was trying to be the queen of may.Isabel was trying so hard that she told the teacher how do you become the Queen of may. the teacher had picked the student it was someone that Isabel know. Isabel thought about it was about good A’s.
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If I was Esperanza I will told Mama two things like to tell you. The first thing when Esperanza told Mama when Esperanza told Miguel like your job and you're a patriot
ReplyDeletenow we can't get no food for the babies and you had to dig the mind why did the other people did it so they can dig. Esperanza told Mama what happened to Miguel and he leave so he can go get another job.
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If I was Esperanza I would have told Mama that “Isabel did not make it for the Queen of May”. Then I would tell her (Mama) that “Miguel and I got into an argument and he ran off”. Then another thing I would tell her is that I did good with the babies and I took care of the house. Last but not least I would tell her “I love you and missed you” “oh wait one more thing” “I esperanza (hope) this will never happen again”
ReplyDeleteIf I was Esperanza I would have told Mama that “Isabel did not make it for the Queen of May”. Then I would tell her (Mama) that “Miguel and I got into an argument and he ran off”. Then another thing I would tell her is that I did good with the babies and I took care of the house. Last but not least I would tell her “I love you and missed you” “oh wait one more thing” “I esperanza (hope) this will never happen again”
ReplyDeleteIf I was Esperanza Talking to Mama I would talk about the Queen of May then I would talk about the conversation about her and Miguel. I will tell her about the strikes. And I would talk about when is Abuelita coming back and how can we get her to come here. My last thing I would talk about is how would the money orders just disappear.
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ReplyDeleteIf i was Esperanza i would tell mama about me and Miguel was having an Argument and that it was my fault that Miguel was gone and that Isabel was not the queen of May so that is what i will tell mama
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Mama I think I drove Miguel away we got into a big argument I said “are you on the other side of the river now no you are still a peasant” I feel really bad. But also Isabel wanted to be queen at her school so badly she prayed every day she had straight grades although her teacher did not pick her cause she picks the girls with blond hair blue eyes. And finally the California folk get pools we are allowed to swim on Fridays right before it's cleaned.
ReplyDeleteI would tell her first that Miguel is gone and all the people that were on the camp were striking. I would tell Mama that I have been taking care of the babies, dishes, and the whole house. Most importantly cooking food for us. We are so grateful to have mama here. Stocking School
ReplyDeleteWhen Esperanza was at the hospital talking to mamma and what Esperanza said was she was going to tell everything that happened when she was gone for 5 months. Then when mamma got back she didn’t tell her everything that happened, but the only thing she told her what happened was Miguel left. Also Esperanza said she going to tell her everything but what she didn't tell mamma that Isabel didn't be queen of the may and that she gave her porcelain doll to Isabel, and that's what Esperanza didn't tell mamma.
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Mama when you were at the hosptale we went to Disneyland and we got you a snow globe. When you were gone for 5 months we got you a donkey so you don't be lonely. Hey mama we got you a new car so you don't have to walk again. We got you a new house for you mama so you can put all of your stuff. Mama we got you tickets to see Grand Rapids drive vs the bulls, lets who wins. We got you tickets to mexico to see grandma because she got's a new apartment. Mama Mama we got you a new couch so you can relax and sleep. Mama we made you a poster of you and we made dinner for you because maybe your hungry.
ReplyDeleteBryan g can you make your question make sense because i can't understand it because in the story it said nothing about Disneyland or a snowglobe or a new car or tikets to Grandrapids vs the bulls in the story so you need to reread your question please.
DeleteIf I was Esperanza I would tell Mama that at Isabel’s school they pick a girl in their class to be queen of may and they base it on grades. They did not pick her only because she is Mexican even though she has straight A’s. They always find a way to pick blondes with blue eyes.
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“Mama I have so much to tell you about what happened over the past 5 months Miguel and I got into an argument over his job because people from Oklahoma came said that they would take half of the money that they were paying the people that were already there and they told Miguel to go dig ditches”. ” I learned a lot of things while you were gone I learned how to take care of the babies and how to cook I also learned how to take care of myself and gave the doll that papa gave me to I gave it to Isabelle ”.
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Mama think I made Miguel go away to look for a job he told me a story about him being a peasant I was so angry I told him that he still was a peasant we had a big a big argument I wish that i never said that he was still a peasant.Isabel wanted to be queen at school the teacher told her she want girls with straight A’s and the teacher only wanted girls with blond hair girls and blue eyes girls.
ReplyDeleteWhen mama gets out first would say “ Mama Miguel was gone and it was my fault because we argued about that there was no hope ……….and strikers were taken to Mexico and i found her in the back room hiding behind a crate when I was getting more rubber bands and I helped her get out so she can be with her mom………. Isabel want to be queen of the may but she didn’t win and she thought she would be it queen because she got good grades but her teacher said it was not just about grades. So i gave her the doll papa gave me also i didn’t really need it.
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The first thing I would tell Mama would be about the money I earned in my job.I am Jose from Dickinson Academy.
ReplyDeleteThe first thing that i would tell Mama is that the strikers have been taken away because of their behavior.Joaunhe berry from Dickinson Academy.
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ReplyDeleteFirst i'll her by the past five month's I have been working to pay your hospital bill,but Miguel had took all of the money to pay your hospital bill.
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the first thing i would say to my is nice to have you back, then i would say look how much money we earned. this is Alex Diaz from Dickinson school
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ReplyDeleteIf I was Esperana I would tell her that the people on camp were striking
ReplyDeleteI would tell Mama that Esperanza got a job and is working really hard I am Miguel from Dickinson Academy.
ReplyDeleteThe first thing I would tell Mama nice to see you and what I did to earn money. this Xavier E.from,Dickinson school.
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