Tuesday, January 19, 2016

Write a poem describing a character.

Write a poem that describes a character in the book Esperanza Rising.

55 comments:

  1. Tyson from campus elementary Tio louis is big fat and mean if i was momma id tell him you ain't the king papa is the only king and he also has a huge team.

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    1. Tyson I agree that Tio Louis was wrong nice work!

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    2. Tyson I agree that Tio Louis was wrong nice work!

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  2. Tyson from campus elementary Tio louis is big fat and mean if i was momma id tell him you ain't the king papa is the only king and he also has a huge team.

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  3. Esperanza so sweet
    as the wind flows through her hair
    she will always know that papas there
    shes brave and shes like a rose
    red for strong blooded
    Esperanza calm like the ocean breeze
    like waves is all you can here
    papa is a significant other to Esperanza
    Papa was here everyday light
    and the light he gave her was very bright.

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  4. my poem goes a little something like this but its short ok here i go papa was strong he never had a frown it doesn't matter he has a crown why did he leave now?? thats it lizabeth from campus

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  5. This is Nya Williams from campus Elementary Esperanza is very sweet,Esperanza listend
    To the Earth heart beat.

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    1. dawn fro campus... Esperanza is very very detirmend

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  6. Esperanza is new.But as she grew she discovered things you see don't you agree.

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    1. What would esperanza dad do if her he were there

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  8. im daniel from dickinson academy i think that esperanza isi nice to others so then she help out cause of her mother ramona

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  9. Miguel is really nice because he bought Esperanza's Grandma back from Mexico

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  10. Esperanza is a nice little girl she rich and loves having party's for her birthday and also loves getting doll for each of her birthday she is 1 now so she just got her 13 doll for her birthday

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  12. When Esperanza was at her cabin sweeping the floor why did the other campers laugh at her.

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  13. Miguel is really helpful and nice because he bought Abuelita to Esperanza and her mom. Paris from Dickinson.

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  14. Esperanza is strong and sweet.She stands fearlss and will never be beat.Her mama got sick and her papa is gone .But she still has family and has never forgot to stay strong.

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  15. Esperanza is strong and sweet.She stands fearlss and will never be beat.Her mama got sick and her papa is gone .But she still has family and has never forgot to stay strong.

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  16. miguel is very nice because he brought esperanzas grandma back to mexico.Tyviea from dickison

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  17. The reason why people make sacrifices for others is because sometimes stuff happens like you want it and somethings don't like when my grandpa, he was a officer, and he got shot and died.

    Johniel
    sherwood
    Mrs.thayer

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  19. My uncle was brave when bad people come to my mom's house just like how Miguel pulled out the mouse.

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  20. My uncle wanted to go to my dad's house it was too far away he was wearing
    a bright tide i was blind just like Miguel's tide it was cool and awsome.

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  23. this book is similar to my life.And I finisht the book in a week.

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  24. This book is similar to my life.And I finisht the book in a week.

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  25. Serenity from campus Esperanza is sweet,
    Esperanza is kind,
    Esperanza is the one to say whatever comes to her mind.
    Esperanza has a lot of things going on in her life,
    but she know she has to step up and fight.

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  26. Serenity from campus Esperanza is sweet,
    Esperanza is kind,
    Esperanza is the one to say whatever comes to her mind.
    Esperanza has a lot of things going on in her life,
    but she know she has to step up and fight.

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  27. Gabriela from campus
    Esperanza is kind
    Esperanza is not fine
    her father died in the night
    she saw the light in the sky
    that made her shine so bright
    like a shining star

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    1. your poem was a good one and i agree with you 100% gabby keep up the nice work

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    2. your poem was a good one and i agree with you 100% gabby keep up the nice work

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  28. Dear Marisol,
    I have moved to the United States with mama to get away from Tio Luis.He burned down our house and has tried to force mama into marrying him but mama said no.At first I did not like it down here in the United States because I did not know how to do any thing,but now I love it here.
    From your friend,
    Esperanza

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  29. mama was sweet
    mama was kind until
    tio luis burned down their house
    mama worked hard everyday
    but when she got valley fever
    her kindness flew away

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  30. Abuelita is hurt
    Abuelita is gone
    She got left behind
    Now she must be strong
    Tio Luis will search but not find
    She must have pride
    And move on
    Gabriela fro campus

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  31. Abuelita is hurt
    Abuelita is gone
    She got left behind
    Now she must be strong
    Tio Luis will search but not find
    She must have pride
    And move on
    Gabriela fro campus

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  32. Mama is sick
    Mama is hurt
    when went in the dust storm
    she felt like dirt
    Karmanique from Campus elementary

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  33. Faye from campus Esperanza is the best shes not from the west she dones't make a mess but shes rocking that dress i don't want to say this bad part but Esperanza dad died on her heart and we are not lying now where crying i hope she won but now i'm done

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  35. Tio Luis he's not even clean tio luis he's fat and he's mean he is always wasting my time he's big he got no rhyme Faye from campus

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